tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-225203671729395258.post3192221772704875462..comments2013-07-05T18:37:15.173-07:00Comments on erotic fiction, 4:Play: A Word About Ed DrakeJess C Scotthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13300596391764890974noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-225203671729395258.post-66937988778140218262010-01-12T16:20:54.139-08:002010-01-12T16:20:54.139-08:00Glad you like it :)
P.S. I like that line too!Glad you like it :) <br /><br />P.S. I like that line too!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-225203671729395258.post-43382315428512014582009-12-04T23:30:29.819-08:002009-12-04T23:30:29.819-08:00I like it - it sounds like a diary post, which is ...I like it - it sounds like a diary post, which is good because it has a really strong narrative voice, just like a real diary.<br /><br />I like the line: "Drag myself up the stairs in a weird mix of dread guilt apprehension and uncontrollable wild anticipation and excitement.", especially "dread guilt apprehension" - very nicely put together.<br /><br />jamesbent.com/blogUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13135014008481640250noreply@blogger.com